but_can_i_be_trusted: (Snowsparkle)
Echo Invictus ([personal profile] but_can_i_be_trusted) wrote in [community profile] fandomweekly2017-01-04 10:07 pm

[#027] Peppermint Kiss (Doctor Who)

Theme Prompt: #027: Flophouse
Title: 'Peppermint Kiss'
Fandom: Doctor Who
Rating/Warnings: PG; mild naughtiness/innuendo
Bonus: Yes
Word Count: 204

Summary: "It's not exactly the Hilton," River mused, reclining on the bed. "But it'll do, I imagine."

Their room lacked anything resembling creature comforts. Severely.

"It's not exactly the Hilton," River mused, reclining on the bed. "But it'll do, I imagine."

"I did expect something a bit nicer than this," the Doctor rushed to assure her. He eyed the stained wallpaper with nervous distaste.

She laughed at his unease. "I've stayed in worse, dear; trust me. And this is the honeymoon suite, according to the clerk." Her hand strayed to the bedside table, and a large jar of mints. Casually unwrapping one of the sweets, she popped it into her mouth.

"Some honeymoon suite. It'd take a load of repair work before this even counted as a flophouse!" Frustrated, the Doctor banged his foot against the wall, swearing in pain at the resulting stubbed toes.

"Oh, stop grousing. We're here now; let's make the best of it."

"I'd like to know how the hell we're supposed to make the best of this room--oi!"

Hands had yanked at the Doctor's lapels, dragging him abruptly to the bed.

And directly atop his naughtily grinning wife.

"I'm sure we can figure something out," she whispered before bringing his mouth to hers.

With a peppermint kiss, the room suddenly didn't seem quite so bad.
danko_kaji: My OTP (Default)

[personal profile] danko_kaji 2017-01-08 01:50 am (UTC)(link)
This is really cute. I love your brevity, the fact you can really feel it's sense of dilapidation.

Plus, I'm a sucker for couples who make the best out of any situation, because they are together. <3
Edited 2017-01-08 02:06 (UTC)
hokuton_punch: Screenshot of the First Doctor in a feathered hat with the caption, "old school fabulous." (doctor who fabulous)

[personal profile] hokuton_punch 2017-01-08 02:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee, cute! XD
savethelilin: (Default)

[personal profile] savethelilin 2017-01-09 04:02 am (UTC)(link)
That is adorable, and exactly what River would do with that situation.
alobear: (Default)

[personal profile] alobear 2017-01-09 10:26 am (UTC)(link)
I can absolutely picture this - you draw both characters beautifully, and I love their contrasting reactions.
badly_knitted: (Eleven & TARDIS)

[personal profile] badly_knitted 2017-01-10 11:54 am (UTC)(link)
River always sees the glass half full, and I'm sure she's stayed in far worse places. The Doctor is somewhat spoiled by TARDIS life, but I think River can persuade him their room isn't as bad as all that, at least not when she's right there with him ;)

Loved it!
sarajayechan: Angel and Husk under an umbrella during the "Loser Baby" number ([Pokemon Alola] Lillie)

[personal profile] sarajayechan 2017-01-10 08:44 pm (UTC)(link)
This was cute! I love that they try to make the best of a bad situation like that.
badly_knitted: (Eleven & TARDIS)

[personal profile] badly_knitted 2017-01-11 11:19 am (UTC)(link)
River's presence eclipses her surroundings, regardless of what they're like. She's so vibrantly alive that how can anything else register on the Doctor?