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go ahead, baby, sing that song! ([personal profile] sarajayechan) wrote in [community profile] fandomweekly2016-02-03 12:02 am

[#001] through omniscient eyes (Rune Factory 4)

Theme Prompt: New beginnings
Title: through omniscient eyes
Fandom: Rune Factory 4
Rating/Warnings: PG
Bonus: Yes
Word Count: 719
Summary: She only sees bits and pieces of life going on without her.



She no longer holds her place in the castle, but she's far from dead. The Forest of Beginnings is a plane of existence neither dead nor living, and Ventuswill can see everything.

One day in Autumn, she sees Frey in a beautiful white gown standing beside the man she loved, before the spot that was once hers. Vishnal, in a white suit to match her gown, stands beside her. He takes her hand, lacing their fingers together, and Frey smiles.

"In place of Lady Ventuswill, I will perform the ceremony," Volkanon announces. His eyes are full of tears, and as Frey turns to her groom, so are theirs.

"I wish she could be here."

"She is, sweetie. We can't see her, but...as long as we're thinking of her, she's here."

The bride and groom pledge their devotion to each other, embrace and kiss. As they take the first steps into the Town Square as husband and wife, her vision blurs and she slips back into sleep.


The next time she awakens, she sees the people of Selphia going about their daily lives. Her name keeps coming up, though, even the Sechs spy seems to miss her. And of course, them. Dylas, Amber, Dolce, Leon, all of them who once gave up their own lives to spend guarding her.

Would you do it again, even knowing it would come to this?

But every time, she comes back to Frey. She sees Frey and Vishnal living their new life together, kissing each other good morning, Vishnal preparing lunches for her with varied success. Frey still does her duty as Princess, still tends to the farm and her monsters, improves every skill she can every day.

One day, her vision fades on Vishnal announcing to her that he wants children. When she next awakens, Frey has a daughter cradled in her arms.

"Luna," she says, and Vishnal smiles.

"It's perfect."

She smiles a little as her vision fades once again, and that night she tries to send the new parents and their child her best wishes.


She doesn't know how much time has passed when she becomes aware of a presence in the Forest. A familiar presence that comes and goes, but every moment they seem to be closer. And then the visions come, Frey fighting her way through the Bane Dragon, Octopirate, Crystal Mammoth and countless others until she faces off against the shadow known as Ragnarok.

The barrier falls away, and she can clearly make out Frey's form rushing into the blinding light of the Forest.

"Venti!"

"You shouldn't be here," Ventuswill says sharply. "I sacrificed myself-"

"I came to save you," Frey interrupts. "I...I know you want to come home. That you never wanted to leave." And Frey's right. She misses Selphia, having the people visit her, chatting with Venti. The familiar warmth of the castle. The bustle around town during festivals. Pancakes.

But Frey looks exhausted, dirty and bruised as she holds the Rune Sphere in her hand and Venti knows what she intends to do.

"I won't lose anyone else! I won't allow this!"

"But I'm not alone. The power of everyone who believes in you, wants you to come home...Venti, you belong in Selphia."

The spell only known by Earthmates, so strong Frey's body could never contain its power. She's about to sacrifice her body, her life, chanting the spell and lifting the sphere before Ventuswil can stop her.


She awakens, but not in the Forest of Beginnings. It happens on the first of the month, the first of Spring. Seven years to the day Frey first fell into Selphia. She's aware of her body, solid and alive, the familiar scent and sounds of the castle.

Frey! she thinks once she's gotten her bearings. The last thing she knew was Frey chanting that dangerous spell, prepared to sacrifice herself for Ventuswill's sake. Oh, Frey, you-

"Venti!"

Frey. Vishnal, Luna, her guardians, Volkanon, everybody. Her eyes fill with tears as she realizes how Frey is still standing. Hope, she thinks, that's what powered the Rune Sphere. Not just Frey's, but that of the entire town.

"Thank you."


She awakens the next morning to a fresh day, seeing the familiar through new eyes. The sunlight filtering through the windows, Vishnal hurrying off to work while Clorica rubs the sleep from her eyes. Volkanon standing guard outside the castle.

And of course, the most welcome voice and sight of all.

"Good morning, Venti! I made you some pancakes!"

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[personal profile] goodmode 2016-02-03 01:10 pm (UTC)(link)
It's been a long time since I dipped into RF and this fic reminded me of (cough) certain things I still have to do, haha. (Don't worry, I already knew!) It's sweet and uplifting and I have a soft spot for seeing things all turn out okay, so any exploration of that in fic is super great. Tl;dr I love this a lot, nice work!!
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[personal profile] novel_machinist 2016-02-03 01:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww, the ending line wraps it all up. I love the soft, happy mood that you've conveyed and they way you tossed in some little bittersweet moments to keep it from getting too smoopy.
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[personal profile] alobear 2016-02-03 04:05 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm not familiar with this fandom, but I love the poignancy of this, and the way you show how deeply the characters care for one another.
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[personal profile] flair 2016-02-04 10:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Ohh, this was so sweet... and the inclusion of pancakes as one of the things Ventuswill missed most made me smile. And reminded me that I still have to pick up RF4 one of these days and play it, haha.
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[personal profile] etoile_noire 2016-02-05 12:07 am (UTC)(link)
It's a cute story; I enjoyed reading it.
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[personal profile] ser_pounce_alot 2016-02-06 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
RUNE FACTORY 4!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love this game! i love the look at ventuswill behind the "curtain", so to speak, in the lost time when she's just watching. time just flows, but she still knows it's there.
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[personal profile] peaceful_sands 2016-02-06 09:32 am (UTC)(link)
A poignant piece, even though I'm not familiar with the fandom
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[personal profile] iluvroadrunner6 2016-02-06 05:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Completely canon-blind here, but I really loved the way this was written. Even though I didn't know these characters, it still resonated with me emotionally in a really lovely way, and people banding together to get the job done for someone they love really is one of my weaknesses, so this was really well done.