[#001]No Choice at All(One Piece)

[icedark_elf]

Theme Prompt: #001
Title: No Choice at All
Fandom: One Piece
Rating/Warnings: PG
Bonus: No
Word Count: 50
Summary: Ace gets a choice.

So short, just warning you. So very short. Was a challenge to myself.


Ace had a second chance. He could live. He just had to make a different choice than before.

Ace didn’t. Once again, he flung himself between his brother and a fist of magma. He couldn’t imagine otherwise.

Some choices couldn’t be changed. Never.

Ace would always choose his brother. Always.

Comments

[etoile_noire]

There's a nice amount of emotion for 50 words. Good job on getting a story in that few words. I doubt I could ever do something so short.
Thank you for sharing it.

[icedark_elf]

I love doing micro-fics. Never got down to six word stories, but I enjoy them. I'm glad you liked it.

[sarajayechan]

Seconding etoile_noire. So few words, so much emotion.

[icedark_elf]

It's a fun challenge to write tiny fics that make sense. Thank you for the reply.

[hokuton_punch]

Oh, nooooooo, Ace! ;o;

[icedark_elf]

Oh, yessss, Ace! He's very determined to protect his baby brother. I'm glad I was able to get this written up, as it hit me last second while I was working on a fic for another challenge.

[alobear]

This is great! And short is hard - and very well done here.

[icedark_elf]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, it's always fun to see what people think.

[badly_knitted]

Packs quite a punch for so few words!

[icedark_elf]

Thank you. I was going for short and to the point.

[wallwalker]

Ouch. What an impact. Very good.

[icedark_elf]

Thanks. I enjoy doing short stuff, it has some nice impact.

[tickletheory]

This worked well as a really short form. Ahhh Ace and his love for Luffy 😭

[icedark_elf]

He does love his brother. For Ace, there is never a choice that ends up with Luffy dead. I love that about him.