[002] Twenty Seven [One Piece]

[icedark_elf]

Theme Prompt: 002-Heartbreak
Title: Twenty Seven
Fandom: One Piece
Rating/Warnings: PG
Bonus: Yes
Word Count: 179
Summary: Law turns twenty seven.



Twenty seven.

Law was twenty seven now. The crew had spent the day throwing him a party, and he had to admit, it was good.

Twenty seven.

Finally alone, Law found himself leaning back against the door, hand pressing against his chest. He....

A year older than Cora-san.

Fourteen years ago, Law had expected to die. He had been ready for it. Then Cora-san happened. Cora-san found a way for him to live, found a way to make Law want to live.

Fourteen years since Cora-san had died so that Law could live.

Now Law was twenty seven. A year more than Cora-san ever had the chance to see.

Fingers pressing against the tattoo on his chest, Law let himself sit, shoulders shaking as he started crying. He had outlived Cora-san in all the way he could, and it hurt. Cora-san should have lived, but he hadn’t.

So Law was going to have to do it for him.

Didn’t mean he couldn’t still mourn for the important moments that Cora-san missed.

Comments

[dray]

Oh no, that's so sad!

Very effective little heart-punch, well done.

[etoile_noire]

Very sad. Lots of emotion in so few words.
Thank you for sharing it.

[rivulet027]

That's so sad. Glad he took a moment to grieve.

[badly_knitted]

Ohhhh! That tugs at the heartstrings.

[sarajayechan]

Oh, jesus. "I'm a year older than they are" is so rarely explored as a trope compared to others, this is heartwrenching.

[icedark_elf]

Thank you. Law really got hit hard by it, and it was fun to write it.

[icedark_elf]

Thank you for commenting. I've been enjoying this short challenge.

[icedark_elf]

He definitely needed it. Lots of guilt there for him.

[icedark_elf]

That was the goal. Poor Law has been holding that in for a long time.

[icedark_elf]

All due to a chance comment by my roommate. She's an enabler. And it's a fun thing to explore. I might come back to the idea for a longer story.

[canadiandiamond]

I'm not familiar with the fandom but I didn't need to be to feel the emotion and heartache Law expresses here. Well done!

[autobotscoutriella]

I'm not super familiar with this fandom (mostly osmosis through friends), but oh, this is sad and lovely. Packs a great emotional punch in very few words.

[icedark_elf]

Thank you~ If nothing else, I will expose people to the adorable that is Law and Rosi(Corazon) through fic here. >.> Though that may be because it's how I got into half my fandoms.

Law obviously was affected by Rosi's death in the canon, as he spent over ten years working on his revenge. Him realizing that he's now older than Rosi ever got to be.... It fit perfectly with the theme.

[icedark_elf]

It's how I started. Only got into it in the last year or so.

Law has a lot of feels. Even if he mostly expresses them in canon in various shades of asshole. But it was fun writing this in such a short set of lines. Short works really well for pure gutpunch emotions.

Thank you for the comment, I really appreciate each and every one.